Thursday, 12 October 2017

Chapter 179 speed

Chapter 179 speed

Chu Yunsheng turned the cloak back and forth trying to find a way to activate this cloak, he even tried to infuse yuan qi inside, but nothing happened.

After a long sigh. He gave up. The cloak is not something he could understand at the moment. Maybe one day he would be able to find out the mechanism behind it and use it on his armour.

The hazy shimmer once again shed light into the crater. He had been staying in this place for three days now. And many insects were still running towards the huge pit left by the black sphere.

He didn't know for how long it would continue. But he couldn't stay here for very long. Because the insects around the golden shell had started to pile up. And soon the swarm would notice the difference and surround him.

The golden shell was in “sleep” mode because it had not received any command from Chu Yunsheng for a very long time. a few insects had noticed it and tried to move the “dying” golden shell away. So Chu Yunsheng had no choice but to use the type two dark energy gun to kill them.

Fortunately, in the last three days, he noticed the insect’s running pattern. There was roughly a 10 minutes gap between each big wave of insects running towards the huge pit. He could use this 10-minute gap to run away.

As he was thinking, another wave of monsters was running towards the huge pit near the crater.

He had to go now. He couldn't wait until the sky went completely dark. The insects might be able to detect him in the dark and he couldn't see the directions, thus once he ran into the swarm it would be really over.

He quickly recited the incantation to seal the golden shell again, then he slowly moved up towards the edge of the crater and began to crawl on the ground. At the same time, he looked around trying to find anything that might give him some information, so he could tell where his location is right now.

After the city disappeared, there was only a gigantic pit left on the ground and he had already lost his sense of direction when the golden shell dug into the ground three days ago.

The only thing he could use as reference were the giant tombs at the distance. But originally Jin ling was surrounded by the tombs, so there were tombs in all four directions.

He looked around once again, but he couldn't find any sign of Yangtze river. It means that he is most likely not on the west side or the north side of the huge pit.

But whether it was the east or the south, it didn't really matter at the moment. He just needed to get out of here as soon as possible.

 There was a green dragon mountain to the east of jin ling. The vast mountain range is an ideal place for him to hide. There was also an abandoned small town to the south. There were many newly developed housing estates in here. So it is also a good place for a short stay.

Two minutes quickly passed as he was thinking for a place to hide. But he didn't stop crawling. Because the next crater is almost 100 meters away from him. And he needs to get there, dig a hole and cover himself with soil in 8 minutes. After 8 minutes the next wave of insects will arrive.

He was slowly approaching the area of sticky substances. Only in that way would he be able to find more reference objects to determine where he was.  The night was getting darker and the visibility started to reduce. It was blurry around him so he couldn't see anything at the distance apart from the giant tombs spurting out fire from time to time.

When he reached the fifth crater, it has already taken him an hour.

He still couldn't find anything that could be related to the green dragon mountain. He was most likely in the south. He told himself.

With the fire that was spurted out by the tombs. He could vaguely see some shadows which resembled some houses.

Time was pressing and he needed to get out of here before the night went completely dark. He needs to get to those houses and hide in there.

The reason why he needed to speed up was because he noticed that the insects inside the swarm started to act strangely. A lot of insects seemed like they were searching for something towards his direction.

It is no longer safe here. He needs to run! Run as fast as he can!

He was not sure if those shadows were really the houses or not. But there was no choice for him now.

As the last bit of hazy shimmer disappeared from the sky. Chu Yunsheng jumped up and started to run.

At the same time, the insects that were searching towards him all looked up instantly. Then one by one they started to rush towards him and chase him.

Chu Yunsheng was not worried about the insects which were chasing him on the ground. He was more concerned about the green shells on the sky and the hidden monsters ahead of him.

He didn't have the fire levitation ability like what Lan Chaoyin had. He only had two legs.

He had already stored the gun and changed to the sword. Since It was much easier to use the sword to slice open the insects which were blocking his way.

His other hand was clenching onto a Li Huo talisman. Although it was a fire element offensive talisman and it was not effective when attacking the red shells, he only had this type of offensive talisman now.

He didn't want to kill them, all he wanted was to make a way so he could get into those housing estates and hide in there like what he did in the horror city.

Suddenly lightning flashed by the dark sky. It was like a whip that cracked open the dark night.

Since the dark age began. Apart from snow, there weren't any rainy days, let alone the thunder and lightning.

Chu Yunsheng was stunned for less than a second, then he was excited to see many buildings under the lightning. It was like a quiet ancient castle, wrapped in darkness, filled with "mysterious" and "evil" feeling.

But in the next second, his excitement vanished. before the lightning appeared he was running in the dark, he only relied on his sense of directions to guide him towards the housing estate. but when the lightning appeared, he noticed that he was running towards a slightly different direction, and in front of him was another crowded swarm. There were even a few golden shells in there

The lightning only appeared for a split second, and then disappeared. But Chu Yunsheng could still hear the buzzing sound made by the green shells when they were flying towards him.

The land was once again covered by the darkness, apart from the insects screeching sound, Chu Yunsheng once again lost his vision.

But his body did not stop moving, he was still running, he slightly adjusted his direction and ran towards the housing estate.

He had to get through this, no matter what!

He covered himself with the cloaked man’s cloak. although he did not know how to use it, it's powerful defence ability was not weaker than his armour. he could not even destroy it using this sword

Bang…...

Chu Yunsheng crashed into the swarm. with his fast speed and yuan qi energy shield, the first few insects were knocked away instantly. But he was still charging.

Then the sword qi was unleashed, 12 swords qi’s were formed into a spiral shape and drilled a way out of the swarm.

The sword qi was like a shooting star that destroyed all the insects on its way.

But the insects were not afraid of death, many of them tried to fill the gap and some of them were trying to catch Chu Yunsheng from behind. More and more insects started to push in.

When Chu Yunsheng just broke the mandibles of a golden shell which just crawled out of the ground. His upper body was instantly pinched by a red shell.

He quickly broke free from the red shell’s claw, but a green shell has already dived at him. He was knocked over and tumbled on the ground. before he had a chance to get up, he was buried under many corrosive liquids…..

But he did not choose to fight back, he could not kill all the insects, only when he reached the town would he have a chance to run away.

He could not dodge the insect’s attack because he could not see anything, he could only unleash the sword qi to make a way and using the light caused by the sword qi to see the way in front of him.

 At the moment, he only hoped that the cloak, armour and shield would be able to withstand all the attacks!


As long as he was not trapped here by the insects, he believed that he would make it.

But soon, he was buried once again. this time, he was buried by the insects, one insect jumped onto him and the other insect closely followed.  red shells, golden shells, green shells. Insects after insects until it became a hill of the insects, and Chu Yunsheng was buried underneath it.

The sword qi was unleashed underneath the hill of the insects, a few of the insects at the bottom were knocked away, but comparing to the hill of insects, it did not seem to have any effect at all. Chu Yunsheng roared loudly underneath the hill of insects, and his hand clenched on the Li Huo talisman.  Yuan Fu was glowing the dazzling red light and flew towards the sky…...

Edited by Slayer Wolfx
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i have also updated wiki page as well.
there is now a list of character's name in there, and zerg/insects social structure in there.
please let me know which name i should put in there as well. thanks.

11 comments:

  1. 1) behind it and used it on his armour.
    should be: behind it and use it on his armour.

    2)He didn't know how long it will continue.
    should be: He didn't know for how long it will continue.

    3)was in the “sleep” mode because it has not received
    should be: was in the “sleep” mode because it had not received

    4)had no choice but using the type two dark
    should be: had no choice but to use the type two dark

    5)He had to go now. He can't wait until the sky goes completely dark. The insects might be able to detect him in the dark. But he couldn't see the directions. Once he ran into the swarm, then it is really over.

    should be: He had to go now. He can't wait until the sky goes completely dark. The insects might be able to detect him in the dark and he couldn't see the directions (so/thus/therefore) once he ran into the swarm, then it would be really over.

    or my version for this part: (so/Thus/Therefore) running at the swarm, would mean it would be really over.

    (again, I dont know the raws, so I cant be sure, actually, since I dont know would fit better, take a site with all the synonyms of therefore:
    http://www.thesaurus.com/browse/therefore)

    6)he looked around trying to find anything might give him some information.

    should be: he looked around trying to find anything that might give him some information.

    7)After the city disappeared, there is only a gigantic pit on the ground. And

    should be: After the city disappeared, there was only a gigantic pit left on the ground and

    7.5)he had already lost the direction when the golden shell dug into the ground three days ago.

    CAN BE: he had already lost his sense of direction when the golden shell dug into the ground three days ago.

    8)was surrounded by the tombs, there were tombs in all four directions.

    should be: was surrounded by the tombs, so there were tombs in all four directions.

    9)He looked around once again, couldn't find any sign of Yangtze river.

    should be: He looked around once again, (but he/but) couldn't find any sign of Yangtze river.


    10)But whether it is the east or the south, it doesn't really matter at the moment. He just needs to get out of here as soon as possible.

    should be: But whether it was the east or the south, it didn't really matter at the moment. He just needed to get out of here as soon as possible.

    [((honestly, choose, use past or present, Jeez.) I'm confused, is this how you translate it or is this how the author has written it? I'm not an expert in english, especially in past or present and stuff like that, so I cant help in this regard. whatever is closer in the translation works, I guess.)) When I'm frenzy reading, it doesnt come to notice, but now that I am slowly reading, it seems kinda weird and confusing.]

    11)The vast mountains range is an ideal place
    should be: The vast mountain range is an ideal place

    12) There was a green dragon mountain to the east of jin ling. The vast mountains range is an ideal place for him to hide. There was an abandoned small town to the south. There were many newly developed housing estate in here. So it is also a good place for a short stay.

    should be: There was a green dragon mountain to the east of jin ling. The vast (mountain) range is an ideal place for him to hide. There was (also) an abandoned small town to the south. There were many newly developed housing (estates) in here. So it is also a good place for a short stay.

    13)that those shadows are really the houses or not.
    should be: that those shadows were really the houses or not.

    14)He only has two legs.
    should be: He only had two legs.

    15)Suddenly a lightning flashed by the dark sky
    should be: Suddenly lightning flashed by the dark sky

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    1. 16)and in front of him is another crowded swarm. There are
      should be: and in front of him was another crowded swarm. There were

      17)The lightning only appeared in a split second,
      should be: The lightning only appeared for a split second,

      18)it's powerful defence ability it not weaker than his armour.

      should be: it's powerful defence ability was not weaker than his armour.

      19)But the insects are not scared of dying
      should be: But the insects were not scared of dying

      20)but the green shell has already dived at him.
      should be: but a green shell has already dived at him.

      21)only when he reached the town will he have a chance to run away.

      should be: only when he reached the town would he have a chance to run away.

      22) At the moment, he only hoped that the cloak, armour and shield will withstand all the attacks!

      should be: At the moment, he only hoped that the cloak, armour and shield wwould be able to withstand all the attacks!

      23)he believed that he will make it.
      should be: he believed that he would make it.

      24)The swords qi was unleashed underneath the hill of the insects, a few of the insects at the bottom was knocked away,

      should be: The sword qi was unleashed underneath the hill of the insects, a few of the insects at the bottom were knocked away,

      I dont think thats all, I had a hellish week and not much time to point out mistakes, you have so many mistakes lately, anyways, as english isnt my native language and I dont chinise, well, not much I can do, those should be the obvious mistakes, there are still few other mistakes with the use of present continious or past and all those), seriously, you have so many of those mistakes, that I am wondering if its the way the way the author writes or just bad translation. whole paragraphs should be rewriten, in some places if thats the case, for now, just fix those mistakes, and I reread it later, to see what I have missed. like seriously you had lots of these mistakes.

      it even gave me a warning that my message must be lower than 4.096 words to be acceptable, like, dude, I didnt even know the limit before you.

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    2. also, if its the later, and those are mistakes and not way of writting, then we are gonna have a small problem

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    3. well, I was split, to let my edit run free, or it may be just the weird way of writting the story, if only you clarify that. I think I be able to help you more

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    4. Do you have Gmail? Can I sent you the work before upload? It's the mainly bad translation.

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    5. Do you have Gmail? Can I sent you the work before upload? It's the mainly bad translation.

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    6. sure, but I'm not sure when I can reply, as I am studying for exams and have school and all, I will try my best, email is slayerwolfx2@gmail.com

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